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Post your bad goth poems here

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Save us the pain of reading it...


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Heh...
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eh, if people want to post "bad" work here let them. I would rather have literature have questionable quality then no literature at all.

heck I'll show ya.

BLIND

Double heart bleed
It comes
Dumbs
Chuck and chive away
my sweetness has gone away
when I last saw you you were smiling
and wishing for another
I left you because you
were unsentimental
and untruthful
and miserable
and I came back
to you because
you were
you.
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Post by footprintzinthesand »

Celestial Dung wrote:eh, if people want to post "bad" work here let them. I would rather have literature have questionable quality then no literature at all.

heck I'll show ya.

BLIND

Double heart bleed
It comes
Dumbs
Chuck and chive away
my sweetness has gone away
when I last saw you you were smiling
and wishing for another
I left you because you
were unsentimental
and untruthful
and miserable
and I came back
to you because
you were
you.


That's really not all that bad.... I've seen A LOT worse...
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