"What a pain!"

Snap Dragon · Post by **Snap Dragon** » Wed Mar 10, 2004 9:11 pm

WHAT A PAIN
I'VE GOT A STRAIN
MY FEET ARE SORE
MY BACK, IT ACHES
MY STOMACH'S FULL BECAUSE OF CAKES
MY HEART IT THROBS
BECAUSE OF JOBS

I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT I'M STILL SAIN!

Love · Post by **Love** » Thu Mar 11, 2004 4:21 am

Sane.

Quit your job and start doing drugs. Maybe then you'll be able to spell and write decent poetry. :imu:

Mother Mo · Post by **Mother Mo** » Thu Mar 11, 2004 5:49 pm

My daughter isn't old enough to have a job, nor stupid enough to do drugs, thank you. Please go vomit your ugliness somewhere else. You're starting to stink up the place.

Snap, that was very good. I'm glad you posted it. Don't let the tantrums of ill-mannered children deter you from expressing yourself. Some people name themselves after things they have never known.

Snap Dragon · Post by **Snap Dragon** » Thu Mar 11, 2004 11:31 pm

What can you expect?!....I just copied down a poem i wrote in the 4th grade!!! I didn't pay attention to every detail...and besides, like to leave my poems as unaltered as possible so I can see how I had it originally. :evil:

Celestial Dung · Post by **Celestial Dung** » Tue Mar 16, 2004 11:05 am

Sorry I came to this so late. For future reference though....Criticism is one thing but outright rudeness just can't be tolerated.

Sorry Snap Dragon. Feel free to poste more.

Hate · Post by **Hate** » Tue Mar 16, 2004 8:13 pm

Oh...I'm sorry. I thought this was a joke, not an actual poem.

If you do drugs, you're stupid.

Mother Mo · Post by **Mother Mo** » Tue Mar 16, 2004 9:54 pm

You know what they say about assumptions.

spookwhore · Post by **spookwhore** » Thu Mar 18, 2004 3:52 am

Snap Dragon wrote:What can you expect?!....I just copied down a poem i wrote in the 4th grade!!! I didn't pay attention to every detail...and besides, like to leave my poems as unaltered as possible so I can see how I had it originally.

That's very charming. I still have things from when I was in grade school. It's nice to go back & read the things you thought the world was like. I would sell my soul to have that innocence back. Snap Dragon...very nice. ;-)

I would like to read alot more of your new poetry. I liked the last one very much. Oh, and thanx Mo for the kind words on mine too.