"Lotus Petals in Afternoon"

spookwhore · Post by **spookwhore** » Sat May 15, 2004 7:49 am

"Lotus Petals in Afternoon"
By: Trevor de Sade

Sunshine glistening off black shape
Tendrils of faith & blasphemy
Wretched in it's own disguise
Fiend like no other

Oh, mirror
Tell me what lurks inside
I wait...
Paitiently but, get no reply

Is it a pet or creature?
Slave or abomination?
Tell me what twists inside?
What leads me to temptation?

This black lotus inside it's flower-like filth & sorrow
Taunting the sun, as it spreads it's bat-winged bloom
These things I imagine as the source of my dementia
As the sunlight bleeds into the room...

jinx · Post by **jinx** » Sun May 16, 2004 12:24 pm

*picks up jaw off floor*
damn.

damn.

damn.

spookwhore · Post by **spookwhore** » Mon May 17, 2004 8:52 pm

Wow, that's the best response I've ever received. :lol:

TiredUnhappy · Post by **TiredUnhappy** » Mon May 17, 2004 9:01 pm

I could say something about this poem, but what's the point? Because I am the "girlfriend" it doesn't amount to dick. In the end an outsiders response will hold more ground than mine, simply because it can't be bias.

I did enjoy this, as I enjoy all of Trevor's poetry. It is for the most part the only reason I go on here.

sapphirerose · Post by **sapphirerose** » Mon May 17, 2004 9:39 pm

I enjoyed this one alot.
I love the imagery: tendrils of faith and blasphemy....flower-like filth and sorrow.....bat-winged bloom.....sunlight bleeds

spookwhore · Post by **spookwhore** » Tue May 18, 2004 4:03 am

Thanx Rose...

And...Winsley, you don't have to post just to make a point, dear... :nopity:

TiredUnhappy · Post by **TiredUnhappy** » Tue May 18, 2004 12:56 pm

spookwhore wrote:Thanx Rose...

And...Winsley, you don't have to post just to make a point, dear...

you don't have to use a message board as a way to spite me. you know this right? I know you're in your horrible mood and all that, but going on a message board to slap me in the face is a bit ridiculous. :lol:

spookwhore · Post by **spookwhore** » Wed May 19, 2004 8:24 am

*AHEM*

http://www.knoxgothic.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=3338

TiredUnhappy · Post by **TiredUnhappy** » Wed May 19, 2004 8:24 pm

spookwhore wrote:*AHEM*

http://www.knoxgothic.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=3338

I think I've apologized for all that and have yet to do it since. I wasn't really being mean, and even said I was being "sarcastic". Although now looking back, I do think it was a bit cruel..hence my apology.

(btw, hows the view from there?)

spookwhore · Post by **spookwhore** » Thu May 20, 2004 3:26 pm

TiredUnhappy wrote:
spookwhore wrote:*AHEM*

http://www.knoxgothic.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=3338

I think I've apologized for all that and have yet to do it since. I wasn't really being mean, and even said I was being "sarcastic". Although now looking back, I do think it was a bit cruel..hence my apology.

(btw, hows the view from there?)

I can see my house from here. lol.

TiredUnhappy · Post by **TiredUnhappy** » Thu May 20, 2004 3:37 pm

spookwhore wrote:
TiredUnhappy wrote:
spookwhore wrote:*AHEM*

http://www.knoxgothic.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=3338

I think I've apologized for all that and have yet to do it since. I wasn't really being mean, and even said I was being "sarcastic". Although now looking back, I do think it was a bit cruel..hence my apology.

(btw, hows the view from there?)

I can see my house from here. lol.

you know why I love you...because you actually got that. *hugs* you are so fucking awesome! :lol: