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"Perfect Design"

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"Perfect Design"
By: 4X541N7

Constructed...
For for the better half...
We are gearless vessles...
Counting down...
Our deadly sins...
Pushing out our claws...
Our minds...Extending...
Our eyes...Retracting...
Our hearts...Spinning...
Veins twisting beneath the skin...
I can feel the blood shooting...
Inside my chest again...
Alive...
Alive...& Breathing...
For what it's worth...
A compliment to your design...
Better than I ever was...
A machine of god...
The placenta...Left behind...
Blushing...
Rusted...
Bitter...
Iron...
Grinding between my teeth...
Filed down on the bones of past lovers...
Nails blunted...Sharpened beneath you skin...
Where are we...When the machines of god...
Turn to the devil...
Empty promises...Either way...
But I'd follow you into your Heaven...
Disagree....
Disbelieve...
Disassociate from structure...
From conscience...
The things that never mattered anyway...
Take these wires...Feed me...
I'm grinding gears...
I'm losing years...
Of loathed emotion...
I'm a construct...
Built to join...
One design...
Exploded veiwed...
One design...
No designer...
Just the programs...
Just the motions...
Needed to assimilate...
A perfect design...
Built to join...
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I like. Make it an audio track. Indust. style.
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Post by jinx »

*applauds*
yay! this is wonderful.......and i agree with Merc.
eternal life is now on my trail.....


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jinx wrote:*applauds*
yay! this is wonderful.......and i agree with Merc.


I just love hearing that. :twisted:
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Mercurygriffin wrote:I like. Make it an audio track. Indust. style.


You, Prophet, & I could throw it together in just a short amount of time...This will be the first track...
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Post by Aerick Ravenheart »

This song would be great, I really liked it!
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