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Post by Aerick Ravenheart »

I entered the room
to find everything
that I loved
cared about
was gone
taken away from me
each memory
every word written
gone
Nothing can change
the fact that all that
once was
no longer exists
My thoughts and
feelings written down
stolen and or erased
either a tragedy
and a crime towards
the individual
who did this to me
pictures erased
ideas forgotten
hacked away by
a thief criminal
jerk
why couldnt they
use their knowledge
for something useful
other than destruction
and senseless waste
of others property
lost from my mind
taken from me
hacked
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Post by onesilverhand »

Ravenheart

I think this is a good description of a "cyberbotomy". It gives insight into what seems a prankish, faceless crime but is a very real emotional and intellectual violation. Perhaps you could expand this concept and even include alusion to say, medical doctors who tamper with our brains, brain surgery, or accident or disease that hacks away at what we most value: our minds. Your anger is well spoken... can you add another level of dimension (or dementia) to create a broader context: more chilling in its message?

Just a thought.

By the way, your passion is such, I just have to ask, did this really happen to you? If so, my condolences. Losing bits and pieces of our hearts and minds that we have so very painstakingly set out in the physical world via our art, is a loss as large as the death of a dear one.

Keep creating. There is a support groups of literary bums out there... however small amd disturbed we may be ... LOL.

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Post by Aerick Ravenheart »

Yes, about 30 something poems of mine were erased after a hacker fucked up http://www.marilyn-manson.net/forums....It really pissed me off and brought me into a depression. Fuck hacking sonofabitches...sigh.lol...L8er
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Post by Mother Mo »

So sorry for your loss, dear. That really sux.
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