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liquid stars

Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2003 12:13 pm
by jinx
i've got constellations
burned into my skin
i've got galaxies
that you could never dream within
meteors and metaphors
portals for the soul
time warps and white dwarfs
and my heart is a black hole.

Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2003 12:13 am
by Coor
I like it. Very well expressed, you don't see that much anymore. You rhyme, which I'm not a big fan of, but you don't over do it. It fits the poerty well. Oh, and I like your siggy. I too am full of useless info. ;)

Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2003 9:40 am
by junkie christ
one of your better, dear..

Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2003 11:35 am
by Sir Diddimus
I agree with Junkie

Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2003 2:47 pm
by Nemesis
Very nice....