what are we to the earth and sky?
a speck of mortal dust
to irritate the immortal's eye?
the last coherent thought
in god's drunken state of mind
a good idea gone bad
the bloody mess in a beautiful tide......

...to take view off the unresting
Crusified to find a moment to relax
Here is the flesh that we distort
Makes the planet revolt at our scent
Nightshade & Wormwood & Lilac
Nevermind our fragile hands
Still they break our Mother's spine...

I think that's great, I like it. I just wanted more. Take it as a compliment & don't take offence to this. All love...

jinx wrote:what are we to the earth and sky?
a speck of mortal dust
to irritate the immortal's eye?
the last coherent thought
in god's drunken state of mind
a good idea gone bad
the bloody mess in a beautiful tide......

i like it.
one of your better.