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mirrors in her eyes
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 10:59 pm
by jinx
everything she sees
reflects back to me
and i need that responsibility
to keep me in sanity.
those eyes, they see
too far into me
and everything i am
is what she will be.
keep up my head
and scars off my skin
because what she sees
she will keep within.
and every word i say
she'll repeat to me one day
and everything in my dialect
i must overview in her respect.
she's got mirrors in her eyes
i see myself in what she'll do
and in those mirrors in her eyes
i'll see myself the way you do.........
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 11:01 pm
by jinx
if you can't tell, this poem is about my daughter and how everything i do will affect her outcome......
sorry,had to point out the obvious.
hope you enjoy it!!!
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 11:22 pm
by junkie christ
i think its sweet
...
Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2003 5:46 pm
by TheWhirlwind
if youve seen red Dragon recently, its kinda creepy
Re: ...
Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2003 10:10 am
by spookwhore
TheWhirlwind wrote:if youve seen red Dragon recently, its kinda creepy
That's what I was thinking when I read the title. I have to agree with JC, it is sweet(it's hard to imagine JC using the word "sweet" in everyday venacular). Also, I'm very happy you realize that your child will reflect you in almost every mannurism. Most people don't EVER realize that. It makes me sad really.
Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2003 10:14 am
by vicious_blood
That's really good...I like poetry that reflects the author.
(does that make sense?)
Re: ...
Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2003 4:09 pm
by junkie christ
spookwhore wrote:TheWhirlwind wrote:if youve seen red Dragon recently, its kinda creepy
That's what I was thinking when I read the title. I have to agree with JC, it is sweet(it's hard to imagine JC using the word "sweet" in everyday venacular). Also, I'm very happy you realize that your child will reflect you in almost every mannurism. Most people don't EVER realize that. It makes me sad really.
jinx is one of the ONLY people on earth whos heard me say alot of things...and do alot of things for that matter.
hell shes even seen me refer to food as *yummy* which is about the most uncharacteristic thing ive ever done.......
and shes heard me hum elton john songs.
but she is a really good mom, and if you hear her talk with her kid................... its sickenly adorable.
Re: ...
Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2003 4:15 pm
by Sir Diddimus
TheWhirlwind wrote:if youve seen red Dragon recently, its kinda creepy
I was telling her that as she was typing it. I don't believe she has seen the movie.
no doubt
Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2003 10:11 pm
by TheWhirlwind
oh i wasnt implyign that somehow she doesnt care about her child, but the titlle made me think of the movie is all, and the connotations just ...well...yeah