Clawing at my skin
Gouging at my eyes
Feeling all the hurt
Feeling all the lies
Feeling your soft skin
Gazing at your eyes
Wishing that the hurt
Inside me would just die.







(Ok, it was suppose to be gorey but I kept losing my train of thought...anyways, there ya go )

awwww. I felt sorry for this one 'cause no one responded. [[dude, 'fallen at least SHOULD have???]]

But I LIKED IT ALOT. Actually, It seemed very meaningful and heartfelt. I gotta tell ya, I think this may be one of the most impressive ones yet...

Alright, LOVE YOU FOREVER!!!
~W

Yep...

vicious_blood wrote:Clawing at my skin
Gouging at my eyes
Feeling all the hurt
Feeling all the lies
Feeling your soft skin
Gazing at your eyes
Wishing that the hurt
Inside me would just die.







(Ok, it was suppose to be gorey but I kept losing my train of thought...anyways, there ya go )

short and sweet....three chord poetry...just the way I like it....yea fallen should have posted something about this it is in his honor after all....

punkrockjoe wrote:

vicious_blood wrote:Clawing at my skin
Gouging at my eyes
Feeling all the hurt
Feeling all the lies
Feeling your soft skin
Gazing at your eyes
Wishing that the hurt
Inside me would just die.







(Ok, it was suppose to be gorey but I kept losing my train of thought...anyways, there ya go )

short and sweet....three chord poetry...just the way I like it....yea fallen should have posted something about this it is in his honor after all....

Yeah he should have.
But, I'll forgive him. Actually, it was suppose to be more gorey and all but I kept getting distracted, that's why it's so short.
And everyone keeps saying it doesn't sound finished.
Anyways, I'm glad ya liked it.