~ -

kissmeblack · Post by **kissmeblack** » Wed Jan 07, 2004 1:15 am

Places in you are coming apart
Compelling me to write
Forsaken in a way

I once believed you were above this
It stings a little to hear
You're letting others decide for you
I don't see why it hurts

Maybe to know you did something
So low and disregarding

All aspects of you are separating
And I pull back your layers
And I take off your shade

downbeforetheworld · Post by **downbeforetheworld** » Sat Mar 20, 2004 8:48 pm

well done love

Hate · Post by **Hate** » Tue Mar 23, 2004 2:58 am

Yes. Very well. Keep writing.

kissmeblack · Post by **kissmeblack** » Tue Mar 23, 2004 9:50 am

Thank you both.

Hey DBTW, where have you been sweetie?