Places in you are coming apart
Compelling me to write
Forsaken in a way

I once believed you were above this
It stings a little to hear
You're letting others decide for you
I don't see why it hurts

Maybe to know you did something
So low and disregarding

All aspects of you are separating
And I pull back your layers
And I take off your shade

well done love

Yes. Very well. Keep writing.

Thank you both.

Hey DBTW, where have you been sweetie?