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"Antihuman"

Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2004 8:23 am
by ODDITY
"Antihuman" by: Zel Mordrake


We are the shadows
We are the stagnate
We are the hated
We are the introbeasts

We are the vile
We are the nocturnal
We are the future
We are the atrophied

Displacement
In darkness
Unturned by the light
Discarded
In horror
Forever by night

Taken by hatred
Disfigured in red
We are the antihuman
The walking dead

Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 3:50 pm
by TiredUnhappy
Actually, I read this before I knew who you were...and I said something to Trevor about your poem and how I felt like I could relate more closely to it than his... lol


I thought it was lovely 8-)

Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2004 9:49 am
by spookwhore
TiredUnhappy wrote:Actually, I read this before I knew who you were...and I said something to Trevor about your poem and how I felt like I could relate more closely to it than his... lol


I thought it was lovely 8-)


I love that you can relate more closely to a poem about zombies, written by my roommate, than you can to the ones I've written about you.

Mmmm...I feel all warm & fuzzy inside.lol.

Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2004 1:06 pm
by TiredUnhappy
spookwhore wrote:
TiredUnhappy wrote:Actually, I read this before I knew who you were...and I said something to Trevor about your poem and how I felt like I could relate more closely to it than his... lol


I thought it was lovely 8-)


I love that you can relate more closely to a poem about zombies, written by my roommate, than you can to the ones I've written about you.

Mmmm...I feel all warm & fuzzy inside.lol.



your...roommate... that's new. also.. I mean I could relate to the style in which it was written...not what it was about. It reminds me more of my style of writing poetry, than yours. makes sense? :P

(and you should feel all warm and fuzzy inside, cause I love you)