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"The Black Cloud Siloettes of Angels"

Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2004 9:19 am
by spookwhore
"The Black Cloud Siloettes of Angels"
By: Trevor de Sade


My sunlight almost dimmed
By the black cloud siloettes of angels
Placed by the atom of Eden
Radiated & circled by volition
The metal curled, almost withered
Concrete, bursting it's mortered frame
Vapor trails of human souls
Line the landscape
No more peace
Only submission
Brought forth by the thermal, heaven-gift of painless death
Totalitarian filth view our garden of waste
With Hiroshima, gleeming in their glazed-over eyes
We glorify our shackled wrists as we realize...
...we've sold our souls for freedom...

Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2004 6:32 pm
by TiredUnhappy
:dup:

I read it once a while ago, then I decided to read it again because it didn't really appeal to me the first time. Although the second time over really changed my interpretation of it. I think it's quite good dear. You should post some more, I always enjoy reading your poetry/rant. :P :peck:

Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 4:02 am
by spookwhore
I like the "new" posts much better than the old ones. *smiles*

Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 10:33 pm
by jinx
as always,dear,as always.....fucking awesome........... :rock:

Posted: Sat May 01, 2004 10:05 pm
by TiredUnhappy
jinx wrote:as always,dear,as always.....fucking awesome........... :rock:



b-b-but...he's my...dear.. :-( :-( :P

hehe, and yes I agree. I'm proud of him. :twisted:

Posted: Sun May 02, 2004 12:44 pm
by jinx
TiredUnhappy wrote:
jinx wrote:as always,dear,as always.....fucking awesome........... :rock:



b-b-but...he's my...dear.. :-( :-( :P

hehe, and yes I agree. I'm proud of him. :twisted:


i know,honey...i call everybody pet names.i would be proud too.he's very good.

Posted: Sun May 02, 2004 1:15 pm
by TiredUnhappy
jinx wrote:
TiredUnhappy wrote:
jinx wrote:as always,dear,as always.....fucking awesome........... :rock:



b-b-but...he's my...dear.. :-( :-( :P

hehe, and yes I agree. I'm proud of him. :twisted:


i know,honey...i call everybody pet names.i would be proud too.he's very good.


I am proud to be with him, to know him...and proud that he is so talented and intelligent. It is a complete and utter joy being with him. and I'm glad I'm not the only one who recognizes how great and wonderful he is. ;) 8-)

Posted: Mon May 03, 2004 8:56 am
by spookwhore
I don't know if I should be flattered, or a little creeped out. Either way, thanx... you are both such sweethearts!

Posted: Mon May 03, 2004 11:17 am
by TiredUnhappy
spookwhore wrote:I don't know if I should be flattered, or a little creeped out. Either way, thanx... you are both such sweethearts!



ew, no, don't call me that. *shudders* it's so very generic. and you should be flattered, how often do I go bragging about you in public, hmm? :P

Posted: Wed May 05, 2004 1:31 am
by spookwhore
TiredUnhappy wrote:
spookwhore wrote:I don't know if I should be flattered, or a little creeped out. Either way, thanx... you are both such sweethearts!



ew, no, don't call me that. *shudders* it's so very generic. and you should be flattered, how often do I go bragging about you in public, hmm? :P


No...usually if you are saying anything at all about me in public, it's either bitching, or telling people intimate details about us, or just myself...DOn't try to argue either...half of this board can atest.

Posted: Wed May 05, 2004 4:26 am
by TiredUnhappy
spookwhore wrote:
TiredUnhappy wrote:
spookwhore wrote:I don't know if I should be flattered, or a little creeped out. Either way, thanx... you are both such sweethearts!



ew, no, don't call me that. *shudders* it's so very generic. and you should be flattered, how often do I go bragging about you in public, hmm? :P


No...usually if you are saying anything at all about me in public, it's either bitching, or telling people intimate details about us, or just myself...DOn't try to argue either...half of this board can atest.



pot. kettle. I'm not going to run with this. What's wrong with you hon? :-(

edit: okay, glad I got to talk to you about this. sorry about the confusion on the other msg. board. it wasn't at all like that. ;) :P