any comments would be greatly appreciated. good and bad ofcourse.

if you want someone to program electronic rhytms for you, give me a couple weeks to upgrade to my audigy 2 pro... i can probably help you beef up your sound post production, unless the whole compressed thing is what you're going for. If it is, cool, great use of it to get the pseudo-phaser sound. Been looking for a partner in crime to churn out progressive industrial. Let me know what you think.

wow. thanks.
yea ive been looking for some serious musicians to start playing with.

cymbals were good...

vocals could have made it better or worse... can't tell

Good. Very good.

Me Like

( I just cant hope to have you in my band cause I don't have one )

It'll be sometime this month my system will be up since the last reload, I'll toss together some backing beds for you and you can roll with them if you like, see if you like the kind of thing I am going for... If you do, we'll have to get some brainstorming done to get some more in depth music made. SWEET!

for those of you who read the last post not knowing what I was talking about anf going "huh?!?! is this guy coming onto someone?" I was not, a backing bed is music that I will create for smoke to riff over, to see if smoke is cool with integrating with my style, it will go back and forth to see what can come of the melding of our different offerings... then once the adaptation has been made, better and more music can come out of it.

Hm.
I like how inovative you're sounding. But why do this over the web? if you live in the knox area we should just meet up. I do hope for playing live places too. But making a good record (or songs) is also what I am into.