A Book Im wrtiing

[priestofblackness]

Here is something from a book im writting its horror and can be very detialed. It may not be the best writtng, but can be very descriptive in some parts not for the faint of heart or younger people like kids.

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A thing approaches out of the darkness from the shadows of the foggy city in Kuldron, England. Everyone who sees it becomes embraced with fear. They all fear it because when they come in contact with it death will follow. Watching it devour a human being is a very disturbing and grousteque sight to see. On a very cold day in later January 1806 the creature sees an older man walking along the side of the towns church while shaking and holding onto his wooden cane. The man has just left the church, but was the last one to leave the church. The cane looks just as old as the man. The creature approaches him very silently floating through the wind just like a cool brezze. The deadly creature of the night is now following the man in his brown coat very closely. A creepy hand crawls over to Phillip Backis, the old man. It’s touching his long black grayish beard and scratches his face. The creatures left arm is on the right side of his face and the talons are on its left hand are grinding marks into his face and his eyes are open as wide as an owls. His eyes water as it cuts deep-bloody wounds into his face. In fear of the creature not able to scream the old man shakes very violently, but the creature holds him down so hard that he can’t move. It’s almost like he’s a stone without any arms or legs. The abomination of a creature hits the man across his collarbone and he lands face up on the top of the man. The mans eyes get even wider suddenly, the creature takes its right hand and rips out the mans vocal chords. He lifts the mans voice box off the ground and opens its mouth wide and swallows his voice box whole. He tries to scream for help but can’t! Then, the creature opens his stomach wide open sucking out all of his blood and bodily fluids through its very long, long tongue. It’s tongue is almost shaped almost like a square with sharp spikes on each end and has many spores on the end of the tongue used for sucking of blood, and bodily fluids. It also has long spikes that go along the tongue, and the tongue can curl at the end. The creature has many very sharp talons on each of its fingers the two talons on its index fingers are twenty four inches long and the rest of his fingers are just a mere six inches long. The creature takes its two longest talons on its index fingers while the man is lying down on the snow face up and inserts them into the insides of the mans neck. Backis, tries to close his eyes, but the creature won’t let him. The creature puts its left talon into the front and puts its right talon into the back of his neck. Once both index fingers are inserted into his neck the creature says “its time for me to get to know your insides”. He wants to scream, but can only breathe since his vocal chords were ripped out of his neck. After, the creature speaks the two talons inside of his neck have blood sliding and dripping off of the talons some of the blood is dripping onto the mans black grayish beard and some comes out of the back of his neck and is getting smothered into the snow. Once the talons are secured in place inside the mans neck gigantic spikes pop out of the talons while inside the mans neck. The spikes are separated by a mere two inches each and there is eight spikes per talon. Suddenly, the creature grips onto the mans collar bone with its left hand its fingers going through his skin and with its right hand it grips onto his hair holding it tight it rips the mans head off. The creature then crawls up the side of the church until it reaches the roof and rams the head on to the cross on top of the church. After the head is jammed on to the cross of the church blood streams down all sides of the church like a river and smothers into the snow when it hits the ground. The creature jumps off of the top of the building crushing the old mans copper framed glasses and lands on top of the man tearing through the rest of his stomach sucking out the rest of his blood and bodily fluids that remain in his body. The creature then leaves the man face down covered up to the sides with snow and his intestines hanging out on each side. The creature crashes through a window up high in the church. The glass shatters onto the snow and also lands on the floor inside of the church. The creature slowly creeps around with blood and other fluids dripping out of its mouth like sprinkles of rain. The creature licks some blood off of the window cell swallowing some glass. The glass doesn't penetrate the creature as it goes down its throat. The creature walks down the wooden floors leaving a trail of blood and bodily fluids drooling out of its mouth as it walks down the halls of the church. The creature becomes more hungry as time goes by looking for someone or something else to feed on to. It finds a hairy gray rat with beady red glowing eyes. It picks up the rat off of the floor and with its right hand fingers it rips the rats skin entirely off like how a snake sheds its skin time to time. The creature then, sucks out all of the blood and bodily fluids of the rat and sucks the tail down its throat like a piece of spaghetti. Then, it picks the skin of the rat off the floor and eats it whole. It creeps along the next corner and says to itself “what a tasty little treat that was.” While on the second floor of the church it eventually see someone walking by and it kills them just like it did the man lying dead next to the church, but it left the head attached. Then a couple moments later it sees ten or so tasty nuns walking by. The nuns are all dressed up in the traditional black and white dress along with a cap, a cross upon their necks, and black shoes some of them have short hair others long. They slowly walk down the spiral staircase each one of them holding onto the railing as they walked down the stairs. It got colder outside and the nuns are shivering from the weather. It’s harder for the heat to work in such cold weather. They meant to get the heater fixed, but they never came up with enough money from donations to do so. It always ended up they had to use the money for something else other then the heater. Which now is the most important thing to do. The creature isn’t affected by the temperature wether its cold or hot. It continues on following the nuns on the wall where the spiral stairs are. The nuns walk down the stairs and enter a special room. The nuns dont even hear the creature on the wall or hear the drips of blood fall from its mouth drip drip drip onto the stairs. This room is just used for weddings and special occasions like holidays, but it’s also used for funerals. They always go into this room once a week to sing songs and to pray. They sit down on the benches in the room and sing a few songs before they pray. The room has a beautifully structured chandler with diamond cut crystals along the outside of the chandler. Sometimes the nuns may sing Christmas songs no matter what time of the year it is. They especially like the one called “Silent Night”. When most of the nuns were small they were homeless, and were raised in the church by nuns, but later in life they became something grand by becoming nuns themselves. When singing the Christmas songs they remember the time when they were little and sled down the mountains in the snow. They sing the Christmas songs alot because that is around the time that the older nuns adopted the children. The ones who weren’t homeless became nuns around their twenty's or so. The creature sneaks into the room unnoticed while the nuns are praying. It creeps along the floor leaving a blood trail. The nuns unaware whats happening are praying and have their eyes closed. The creature stands up and becomes a horriably disgusting black mass of death that covers the entire room. A large bizarre sound comes from the the creature. All of the nuns stop praying and they look up. While looking up they become very horrified and are trembling with fear holding their crosses hoping god will save them from this nightmare. The creature covers the entire room with its dark shadow. The creature closes and locks all the doors. It hammers boards onto the doors and windows leaving no possible way to escape. It locked and hammered the doors all with its mind. The chandler shakes back and forth you can hear the crystals hitting each other. The darkness gets blacker and uses one of its long arms to grap one of the nuns, she screams in horror and the creature ties a nuece around her neck. She hangs dangling dead on the ceiling. All of the other nuns crying and screaming even more horrified by the gruesome monster that killed their sister. Its awful killing the holy of holy it feels no remorse for its actions. It puts one of its long talons inside the dead nuns neck and out quicker then how fast a cheetah runs. The creature allowing all of her blood to be spilled all over the rest of the nuns. A white ghostly spirit comes out of the hanging dead nun and goes into the horribly, disgusting, monstrous creature. It then reveals something new a body of souls. On the creature you can only see the faces of the tortured souls. The souls that are being tortured look like they’ve been suffering for far to long. While the dead nun swings back and forth the creature rips out the benches out of the floor one by one. The nuns quickly get up and scatter around trying to avoid the creature. All of the benches and the nails attached to them are being ripped out of the floor by the creature. The nuns scatter in the room afraid of being hit by the horrendous beast. The creature picks up a bench with its right hand and lunges it at a few of the nuns hurting them very badly. They are all lying on the ground unable to move and are just laying on the floor waiting to die. All of them hit by the bench have awful bruises and cuts. The awful slimy tentacle arm of the creature picks up some more of the nuns throwing them against the wall and killing them by putting its talons through their bodies. It turns into a big, hairy, sharp big toothed werewolf smashing all of the benches into smitherines. It grabs a nun jamming its claws into her and the werewolf opens its mouth very wide and eats the nun in half leaving only her bottom half. It turns back into the blackness and an opening in the monster opens up. It takes the souls of the dead ones. They are all screaming for help, but no one can hear them inside the room. It kills one after another and another. It sucks out the rest of the souls in the dead nuns. All of the nuns are dead! They all are pale and ill looking on the floor. When you look up you can see nuns smashed into the ceiling and stuffed into walls all dripping out blood. The rest of them dead on the floor some of them missing heads. The room is filled with blood, guts, and its an explosion of death, the room is a bloody massacre. The creature finishes with the souls and goes into the next room. It finds no more nuns in this room or anyone else. In the main entrance of the church Priest, John Hayes is taking a small nap in a room that is located to the side of the main entrance of the church. He awakens unaware that all of the nuns have been killed by a horrific creature. In this room he goes on his knees with his hands crossed and eyes closed he prays for a few minutes. If he only knew of this creature maybe he can get out of the church before it’s to late. It’s no longer a sanctuary for people to come and pray every Sunday. It’s more like a hellish nightmare then a holy place. It’s like satans new home. The priest has not yet left the room when he does then he will see the blood that is falling down onto the church from the bloody head that was jammed into the cross. The priest leaves the room he was sleeping in earlier. He enters another room and climbs the bell tower, and once in the bell tower he rings the bell. He sees the blood streaming down the sides of the church and the dead man lying in the snow without a head. He screams in terror! He quickly runs, and hopes no one is foolish enough to come inside the church. He runs down the hallway and trys to enter the room with the nuns inside so that he can warn them about the gruesome blood and the decapataded man outside of the church. He fears their may be a killer on the loose or he might even be in the church. He trys to open the door to the room, but it won’t even budge. Then, suddenly the black mass of a creature emerges from the boarded up room. He screams “Jesus” with tears coming down his cheeks. Quickly, he runs down the hallway the creature keeps getting closer and closer to him. The creature is very close to him now. He runs back towards the main entrance of the church. Now back in the main entrance of the church he locks the door behind him hoping it will stop him, but the creature just floats through and it blocks the main entrance to the church. The creatures evil looking eyes look down at the priest. His eyes very wide now look straight out the window and hopes to god that he will be saved to go to heaven. The creature devours him. A puddle of blood surrounds the new dead body of Priest, John Hayes. The creature seeps back into the shadows waiting to feed again.

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