"Another Day Has Gone"

[Coor]

"Another Day Has Gone"
-Coor

Thank you doll...
for pouring the concrete
onto the grave...
You made it so much easier to say
"Goodbye," today...

Goodbye, and so long...
another day has gone...
Another one will come
and with each passing one...
A line from your song...
is gone...

Thank you doll...
for the things you said
and the times we had...
"I love you is 8 letters..." She said...
"So is bullshit..."

Goodbye, and so long...
another day has gone...
Another one will come
and with each passing one...
A line from your song...
is gone...

The nights are warmer...
The days are cooler...
The light saves me...
and the dark shames me...
Thank you so...
for now I see...
The monster that became...
of...me.

Goodbye, and so long...
another day has gone...
Another one will come
and with each passing one...
A line from your song...
is gone...

[Aerick Ravenheart]

(APPLAUSE)Bravo, Coor. I enjoyed this one.

[onesilverhand]

Coors

I don't know why you didn't get more response to this piece. It has some very good s**t!!! I will openly STEAL the bit about "I love you" and "bullshit" being 8 letters. (Of course, I will credit you, but I WILL repeat that to friends, enemies, casual barroom acquaintences.)

Have you thought about becoming a Cowboy Punker? This has all the truth of a a cryinyerbeer hit! (God... even your name works)


One Silver Hand

[Coor]

WOW...Ummm thanks...and I can't afford the bail to be all punk rock and whatnots...but thank you anyways...Glad you like it...I am almost finished with the second piece that follows this one...