liquid stars

jinx · Post by **jinx** » Sat Sep 13, 2003 12:13 pm

i've got constellations
burned into my skin
i've got galaxies
that you could never dream within
meteors and metaphors
portals for the soul
time warps and white dwarfs
and my heart is a black hole.

Coor · Post by **Coor** » Mon Sep 15, 2003 12:13 am

I like it. Very well expressed, you don't see that much anymore. You rhyme, which I'm not a big fan of, but you don't over do it. It fits the poerty well. Oh, and I like your siggy. I too am full of useless info.

junkie christ · Post by **junkie christ** » Mon Sep 15, 2003 9:40 am

one of your better, dear..

Sir Diddimus · Post by **Sir Diddimus** » Mon Sep 15, 2003 11:35 am

I agree with Junkie

Nemesis · Post by **Nemesis** » Mon Sep 15, 2003 2:47 pm

Very nice....