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jinx
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my idea of love...

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tie a satin string around my heart
(while everything around me unravels)
please just tie me up until i can't breathe
then scar me with your razor words
make pretty wounds for the world to see
so i can heal in hell
cause that place called heaven is not for me
a walk along the path
i've yet to realize
what is it i'm not seeing?
while my own blood is drowning me
don't i have sharper words inside?
a dialect of weapons
an arsenal of charm
yet no matter how you kill me
you still do me no harm...
eternal life is now on my trail.....


Enjoy every minute. There's plenty of time to be dead.
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who left who? im not even commenting on this at all, that sums it up.
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not being a bitch,but note the day i posted this.........
NOT DIRECTED AT YOU AT ALL.......
just a thought.it doesn;t mean anything literal,the words just smacked me on the ass and said "write me down!!!" like most of my poetry....
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hey i read it and i was drunk
so i fucking made a bad post drunk
like im the only person thats every done that
sorry.
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s'okay........if i was drunk and read it i would've taken it the wrong way too.......
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Post by Codeine Coma »

I liked it.
Thank you for the very pleasant read.
Yes, I have wished you were dead. You are just another face in the crowd, someone who brings me suffering, someone I truely hate.
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