"Pointless Waste"

spookwhore · Post by **spookwhore** » Wed Feb 11, 2004 12:27 am

"Pointless Waste"
By: Trevor de Sade

Glowing with altered vision
Dripping scarlet humanity
Falling from the bleeding orchids
That you gave to me

Nothing but a pointless waste
Another sacrifice that you've made
Tell me, is your heart still empty
Tell me, do you bleed

Say what you wanted to tell them
Empty their words into me
Give all that you have
Just for your moment's peace

I am the emptied chamber
Sulfer & viscera aftertaste
Just like the dirtiest drug
I am a pointless waste

The Stormstress · Post by **The Stormstress** » Wed Feb 11, 2004 6:15 am

I luv that 1, especially the contrasting emotional depth vz. personal distance; thnx 4 sharing it!

Ogre · Post by **Ogre** » Wed Feb 11, 2004 1:15 pm

Ogre like!!!!!!!!

spookwhore · Post by **spookwhore** » Wed Feb 11, 2004 3:09 pm

Thanx for the opinions. This is where I get everything out, on this board. I just start a new thread, & start going, so I'm glad that ppl enjoy it. Thanx guys.

FalseAbsolution · Post by **FalseAbsolution** » Thu Feb 12, 2004 12:55 am

I too enjoyed it... i've been thinking about posting a few more of my poems... but yeah i really enjoyed that poem...

Ashes · Post by **Ashes** » Thu Feb 12, 2004 1:28 am

Beautiful!!!

spookwhore · Post by **spookwhore** » Thu Feb 12, 2004 3:59 pm

Thanx for your opinions too. I guess I will take this time to welcome you, Ashes, to the board. I'm glad that you enjoy my work, & if you have any of your own, I would really like to read it. Anyways, thanx for all the kind support. ROCK ON! *throws up the devil horns* -eNd-

TiredUnhappy · Post by **TiredUnhappy** » Sat Feb 14, 2004 8:37 am

trevor, can you please take my NAME off of your sig. I know I said it, but I didn't really want to be...quoted on it.

btw, nice poem thingy, it's probably the only one I've ever really liked. *shrugs* whatever