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I Fall
further and further
away from reality
dreams of life
fade away
dreams of death
become more intense
I Sit
I grow cold
I grow weak
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I would reconsider red on purple. Aside from that, I thought it was cool.
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TiredUnhappy wrote:I would reconsider red on purple. Aside from that, I thought it was cool.



The Color looks red to me
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yes, the colors don't match well on eachother. It was painful for the eyeballs.
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TiredUnhappy wrote:yes, the colors don't match well on eachother. It was painful for the eyeballs.


Ok. well I will use a different color next time.
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I liked it...
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Post by Coor »

Awww...that was killer, jam...

I wouldn't worry about colors...if anything it will make people on here take the 15 seconds to read it because they are so curious as to what it is. Good stuff though. Sorry about last weekend, but we will be down to see you soon.. *mwah*
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